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18 February 2007

युवा कवि नीलेश “नील”

रायपुर में जन्में, भोपाल से मैकेनिकल इंजीनीयरिंग करने वाले युवा कवि नीलेश वर्तमान में लंदन में है। इनके बारे मे बशीर बद्र साहब कहते हैं ”नीलेश “नील” सच्ची कविताओं की नई आवाज़ है। इनकी कविताएं अपनी आहंग और मौसीक़ी (Rhythm and Music) के लिहाज़ से मुझे बादलों का सफ़र लगीं।”

बेआबरु

तुझे लूट के क्या हासिल करुं मैं
खुद जो लूट चुके तुझसे
हमें प्याला अपना ही दे दे
मिट जायेंगे तुझपे
उस रोज मैं फ़रिश्ता था
उस लम्हां तू फितरत हुई
अब हर दिन शैतान का-इंसान को
फ़र्क नहीं मिलता अपने खत्म होने तक………

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जुमेराती
( भोपाल शहर के नाम )

ये सड़क नहीं
काबिले-जन्नत है
जुमे की नमाज़ का मौसम है
बुजूर्गों की जमात है
बच्चों की ख़्वाहिश है
माहौल की नुमाईश है

शहर (भोपाल) का आशियाना यहां
ये सड़क नहीं
जन्नत की मुस्कान है
मुकद्दर का आईना है
मस्जिद की राह है
ईद की मोहब्बत है यहां
बेखौफ़ हर अंदाज़
की फ़ितरतें हैं यहां
यही है वो
चौदहवीं की राह
जुमेराती-जुमेराती-जुमेराती

(नीलेश “नील” के प्रथम हिंदी काव्य,ग़ज़ल,नज़्म और शे’र संग्रह “चुभन” से साभार)

3 टिप्पणी:

Anonymous said...

tum hamey pehchaano ya na pehchaano
gum nahin
par itna samajh lou
tumhaari ye choti si pahal
kisi ki sooni aankhon mae
sapney jaaganey key liye kaafi hae...
u know ur blog jus fills me with spirits coz its real....... no copied material.....
ur fan.........

ashok said...

Sanjeev ji
I mean thats very nice that you puted Neel Sahab poetry in your blog. I want to give little more brief about his Chubhan book.
the very sorted and famous poetries like
• MANDIR
• GATDHWANI-PRATIDHWANI
• HAM SAB MRATYU HAIN; ISHWAR HAIN
• GATI
• JADU
• SHIRSHAK, KAVITA HUN
• KALAM
• SADAK
• KHUDA-E-JAHMAT
• NASHA
• JUMERATI
• SHIKAYAT-E-EBADAT
• HAR KOI MUJHSE
• PANI MAIN BHI
have been made available on the website www.nileshneel.com or go to his new poetry book pramotinal web page www.lifethepoetry.com
To overview the Chubhan for our readers here is the short note from Pradeep Thapa a renowned journalist/poet/writer. He says “Nilesh experiences life after death in his twenties and perhaps makes quantum leap among his fellow Indian poets.
Neel is simply a fine significant poet of new words and voice. His poetries are primitive and second to none. He uses very Fresh simple and significant words to manifest his primitive writings which are straight to the hearts and one’s life expressions. The book Chubhan can fascinate you to read again and again for its internal philosophy to external expression of very straight alive words.

"sangrahalaya mandir ka drisyana hai to
maa ko ghar me dekh lo
kaho ghar ko murat to
maa ko mandir kaho." (Mandir, p.21)

There is no other sacred temple than mother and her kind heart.

"apane se jeena hai yaaro
to palbhar me marnaa bhi sikho
mar-mar ke jeena bhi sikho.." (Jee ke Marna Bhi Sikho, p.23)

Here you go-life has many dimentions-its rises and downfalls, joy and sorrow-all we have to do is follow the round trip life's funda- "live-die-live-die-live".

"Jaadu saa dikhtaa hun
jaadu ko jeetaa hun
jaadu hun
jaadu ka maaraa hun." (Jaadu, p.31)

He knows what life exactly is. For him life is a jaadu (miracle) and mystry and, yes, is it.

"roj aaine me apnaa cheharaa dekhaa
baar-baar dekhaa lekin becheharaa dekhaa...
...nid me jaagtaa hua bekhwaab hun
kabhi din me khwaab nahi dekhaa." (Roj Aaine Me, p.63)

Nilesh tries to be realistic in this poem but you will find him in rhythm of poetry. Here you see his real heart.

"banda aakho me khoyaa hua noor hun me
charaago ke roshanion me chhipi hui nind hun me.." (Banda Aakhon Me, p.66)

He is nowhere, he is within him and within you-just watch out.

" kaun kahataa hai tujhe shikawaa hai mujhse
mujhko hi shikaayat hai meri." (p.73)

As other human beings he is also simply a human being. God has given us unperfect life which desires and goals never be fulfilled.

"Meri jindagi ka hisaab na punchhe
wo to paidaaisi likhi aai hai." (p.77)

If you are wise enough you never go on spoiling life-life has propose and it is written already.

"Ye maalik mujhe yun na bulaa
abhi bahot kuchh waakiph honaa hai tere kissho se." (p.77)

If our "maalik" wishes there is no way but you still can ask put hold life like Nilesh.

"Ek jhuth ka hun, Ek sach ka hun
kyaa kahun bebashiyon me insaan hun." (p.79)

Life is not a slice of cake. Hard to manage, hard to live if we are not aware of what it is.

"meri aakhon me koi baadal bhej
in khwabon ko ab barasnaa hai." (p.85)

Bitter but wise to accept the reality of our endless dreams and desires.

"mere kabra me naam likhaa taarikh likhi
kisi ne meri umra ki kahaani nahi likhi." (p.87)

Nilesh experiences life after death in his twenties and perhaps makes quantum leap among his fellow Indian poets.

-Pradeep Thapa
(Award winning renowned poet/writer/journalist of Nepal)
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Sanjeev Ji Neel sahab ki nai Urdu Hindi ki book "LIFE" naan sae jaldi hi aa rahi hai........ I have listen few very primitive and fresh shaer from him in one private function but I cant disclose that as the book yet not released. I can say Neel sahab is coming poet of our country just believe it. The best is that he was an english poet and writter and he proved his talent in Urdu and Hindi thanks to Bashir badr sahab to intoduce such a fresh and primitive of his kind in Urdu and Hindi Litrature. In Chibhan he done both Urdu and hindi poetries and in "Life" also he is bringing the same. The combination of Urdu and Hindi poetries in a single book is a rare feature giving a distinguishing attribute to the book. go to www.nileshneel.com for Neel sahab fan I disclose his email id's nileshneel@nileshneel.com
That's it from my side for neel Sahab.
Regards
Ashok
ashokashok42@yahoo.in

wazeer said...

kamaal hua , shahar mein naya shayar hai, hum to shaayad bekhudi mein mashroof they........

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